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And with that, I was condemned to death. Yet I had committed no crime. It was 1692, in Salem, Massachusetts. I sat in the dark, cold dungeon for hours thinking why someone would say I, of all people, would be a witch.
After a dinner of stale bread crust and water, I began thinking of ways to escape. All that was in the dungeon was a small cot, a bench, and half-full pitcher of water. Nothing useful. My hope was diminishing.
I laid down on the cot and thought of why someone would accuse me of being a witch. I was condemned to Gallows’s Hill for seemingly no reason. I was to be hung the next morning and desperation set in.
I began crying.  Crying as if I were a baby away from its mother. I cried about my life about to be cut short. Death scared me. My biggest fear was that it would be long and drawn out. I didn’t want the pain to last. I cried myself to sleep.
“Rebecca Nurse, you have been condemned to death for the crime of witchcraft,” the man read from a dried piece of parchment. The man who controlled the floor panel tensed. With a nod from the judge, he pulled the lever.
©2006-2009 ~iluvarbok
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A "witch" in Salem followed until death. Note, this is an idea. I want to see how people react, so please comment.

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:iconredbishopinlove:
hmmm, again, very short, but I like the idea of writing from the accused person's perspective.
Could develop into a pretty good story :)

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:iconxxdeceptivexx:
Good!

You seem to write a lot of historical stuff. It's interesting. Have you ever read "The Crucible"? It's all about this stuff. It's a play but worth a go, I liked it.
:iconsekonds:
I actually /kind/ of liked this one! You should develop this one into a couple of chapters! Just one thing though, in the first sentence you start your sentence off with And. MS would kill you! I think you should change it. Other than that, nice job.
:iconiluvarbok:
I'm not changing it. I've done that before with MS and she enjoyed it
:iconiluvrukia:
Wow I like it!It rocks!It has a creepy and gothic feel to it!
:iconmindfreak101:
I think it's a good idea. Just stretch it out.
:iconcotf:
You wrote nung instead of hung

short sweet and to the point. I wanted to read about the Salem Witch trials, just never got the chance
:iconcotf:
Of course not, what was I thinking?

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